Talk:The Republic Of Lumina

This is the best thing you've ever made Shar. It's amazing how you put more effort into your vanity article than all your previous edits combined, but whatever. This is how the history section for all realms that cross multiple servers should be done. Follow it. Love it. Lightbulbs 16:57, 2 June 2011 (MDT)

I do not understand what you are exactly talking about, Lightbulbs. It is clear the Connor made this page. --Sharingan616 17:02, 2 June 2011 (MDT)

The format for this page is great, but the content was absolutely horrible. Also thought you wrote this since you appeared to have the most recent edit on it. I could care less about content, I'm only here to make sure the pages are organized. Lightbulbs 17:20, 2 June 2011 (MDT)

Connor wrote it and I proceeded to fixing it up since it included grammar and formatting errors. This page is also lacking much information. --Sharingan616 17:24, 2 June 2011 (MDT)

Lacking? He listed the reason the SIA failed as because I declared war on them, and didn't even mention the convoluted robbery scheme I hatched which was the real reason. He seems to be inventing "new information" for the most part.

There are a lot of problems with this page. Grammar is crucial on this Wiki, as it's duty is to deliver as much information as possible to users quickly and efficiently, without the user having problems reading it. Also, when writing make sure not to speak in first person. Use third person when writing wiki articles. Make sure you use the correct Wiki formatting as well. --Sharingan616 17:01, 2 June 2011 (MDT)